- twas the night before Christmas all the kids looked out side their windows look at the beautiful clock tower waiting for it to hit twelve`o clock then it start to snow the children looked up with awe and then looked to see the full moon to finish this perfect night then the children couldn't see it they jumped in a fright then they saw a red sleigh dash across the moonless sky then the moon came back as bright as ever then the children heard a "Ho Ho Ho" to end the night...
- by Chrono Phantom |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: moonless snow day
- Artist: Chrono Phantom
- Description: a empty day with out the moon filled with the happiness of snow.......deep i know
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: moonless snow
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Comments (6 Comments)
- The T O X I C papercut - 02/21/2009
- um,sorry,it's a ginormous run on sentence....you had something good in mind but you didn't put it on a paper right.
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- Ookami Amatsu - 02/12/2009
- This is just an un-punctuated list.
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- Akienna - 12/24/2008
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Hey...this isn't a poem..it's just one big run on sentence.
Well, a big run on sentence minus any decent punctuation. - Report As Spam
- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/24/2008
- Punctuation, grammar, capitals, stanzas, planning. You have none of these. You fail at poetry. Go back and learn something before you post into a contest.
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- iRogi - 12/19/2008
- good!
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