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i am a tree,
filled with decors and glee,
i am the tree which signs happiness,
creativeness, and love.
that's why I'm sometimes called gift from above.
When children see me,
they are filled with excitement,
for gifts are coming to their apartment!
when the night comes,
they'll get the things under my being,
and give it to their relatives for safekeeping,
i wonder where they'll give it to,
but the most important is that love is all around this Christmas! wink
mrgreen
- by Enkil the Wind Ryder |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: tree
- Artist: Enkil the Wind Ryder
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- Date: 12/09/2008
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- Casually Cody - 10/14/2009
- The ocasional rythme ties up the poem well, try using unique words using a thesaurus, and to be honest it's kind of cheesy ~Addicted Sexaholic (poem reviewer)
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