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as the snow falls i began to smile
families all together having such a great
as i sit and watch the snow as bright as diamonds
My heart warms up .
Hot-Coca Is ready i didn't want any because
im already warm inside
- by cute_evil123 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: Snow
- Artist: cute_evil123
- Description: as the snow falls i began
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (3 Comments)
- RyeoJackson - 01/28/2009
- Waw...^^ nice one.. sweet
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- AzN_BaBee-Gurlo - 12/31/2008
- Awww...Its So HeatWarming I Like it
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- kkfosdjf - 12/10/2008
- kool but ur tenses are actually kinda mixed up "as the snow falls i begin to smile" or "as the snow fell i began to smile"
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