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As I mimic its angels
Lights of heavenly clouds
Fall upon me!
Each melting away
Each leaving their mark!
And yet there is never a copy of itself
It's original
Even though it's all made
Of the same thing
So elegant and small
Like it's raining jewels of ice!
It's cold as ice to you!
But it always warms my heart!
Even if it's comes and goes
It will always remain in me! heart
- by freakonaleash616 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: snow jewels
- Artist: freakonaleash616
- Description: i made this when looking outside in the snow
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xMurck - 04/19/2009
- lol
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/24/2008
- This poem is very excitable! I don't think you need the heart emoticon in there, get rid of that. Also, maybe some other punctuation besides just exclamation points. It's getting a tad ridiculous.
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