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LIVE, LOVE, AND LAUGH
LIVE=longer
LOVE=stronger
LAUGH=harder
- by nickjonas star |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: dream
- Artist: nickjonas star
- Description: will evreyone shold dream rite? if no one dreams then who will have careers? i guess noone rite! ecatly so follow ur dreams nd i am sure u will get were u want 2 nd never give up in ur self or on other people =]
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: dream
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xX_ITeChNo619_xX - 02/28/2009
- Wow this is the best of all but i would say a 6 but we can go higher so it's a 5
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- Qikko - 12/25/2008
- its very nice. makes people think about the oppurtunities they have if they would just try to make sumthin of their lfe. spelling and grammar not the best but its still very nice
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- All You Hate - 12/22/2008
- Mmmm, i really don't want to be mean, or harsh, but maybe i should tell you this in a nice way before some1 does it in horribly cruel way, your point is good, and i'm a big fan of the LLL motto, but i may guess you're not of English origin, so maybe, you could take some english classes, you have initial, and your vocabulary is good, but your grammar needs some work, no hard feelings ok? just some friendly advice =) so now i'm giving it a 35, maybe later you'll get better rates.
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- nickjonas star - 12/14/2008
- WOW!! BUT NEEDS A LIL WORK BUT NIETHER THAN THAT ITS GOOD !!! biggrin
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