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The cold winter breeze stings my face.
I taste the snowflakes on my tounge.
they taste sweet and innocent
the white snow falls slowly on the ground.
It keeps falling from a deep blue sky.
its getting late as the sun goes down
the sky turns pink and the snow stops
the sun goes down more and it becomes pitch black
everything seems to die as i lay here on the ground
the only thing that is moving is my heartbeat
I can feel my heart pounding on my chest
trying to escape from its prison
but no matter how hard it beats
how much it cries for freedom
it cant escape
its destined to be forever locked away
- by XxNarcolepticN1NJAxX |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Prison
- Artist: XxNarcolepticN1NJAxX
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- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: prison
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Comments (6 Comments)
- II-Perfect-II - 07/09/2010
- Very expressive, well written, and a lot of thought put into it. 5/5 good luck buddy.
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- Fuyuka Kitagawa - 06/21/2010
- I like your perspective....it seems like you have a lot to offer as far as opinion....5/5 It's has depth and development and I hope to see more from you ^.^
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- gabsgirl98 - 06/12/2009
- It was a fabulous poem but the mood kinda made me want to strangle myself! good work. I give you a........................ 4
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- shayismyname2 - 05/30/2009
- Wow 5/5 i loved it
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- XxNimue_SheikahxX - 01/16/2009
- ^^ I like it.
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- M4RlE - 12/13/2008
- Nice Poem! biggrin
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