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Eyes flutter open, vision obscured by the decorated window
Covered in white, a soft blanket settles on the town
The promise of winter's own playground, fresh in the air
The raging storm outside beckons
Asking for a playmate to come and enjoy its work
Trees bending dangerously in the vehement wind
Held in place by ancient roots
Cheeks a deep red from the raw wind whipping out
Skies still dark grey, clouds surrounding a sun that yearns to shine
A single rose, fallen to the white ground
An imprint created
Hands picking up the lone survivor
A small beauty that remained from easier times
Quiet and cold, the storm continues
A vagarious struggle between beauty and perseverance
All a part of nature's cycle of life
Not unlike the way I feel
For we may be many miles apart,
But I find solace in knowing that
Our hearts are beating in synchronicity
- by Lumiere de Lune |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Beauty in a Snowflake
- Artist: Lumiere de Lune
- Description: A poem that uses the image of a winter scene and the remnants of love, and brings them together.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: beauty snowflake
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Comments (6 Comments)
- genesis-san - 08/30/2009
- you did very well using great contrasts and brod vocabulary is a great definant way to write a master piece
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- ezzy111 - 07/10/2009
- Awsome poem!!! Great work!!! *2 thumbs up!*
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- kamkam565 - 01/12/2009
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this is so gay
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- Katania the small - 01/05/2009
- a little cliche at times but there is some really good stuff in there(hint if you've heard it don't ues it)
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- Xx_Mako_xX - 12/27/2008
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Nice poems really good! keep up the good work! *thumbs up*
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- njrox101 - 12/19/2008
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I love this poem
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