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I open the door to the outside world
to see a clear sky
and a white floor
I take a step out
to feel the furry wold
when I touch it my hand freezes
the cold takes hold of me
tha wind picks up
roaring in my ear
the skys once clear
now filled with a hateful gray
I try to run
but my feet are frozen
the door slams
I feel lost in this cold world
the wind die with one last scream
the sky clears as if nothing happend
the door opens
"Julie what are you doing out there?
Come inside quickly!
I heard a blizzard is coming soon."
- by mcrchick luvs u lots |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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Comments (6 Comments)
- rogtar_rage - 02/21/2010
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the poet is some emo bet its great add me rogtar_rage@yahoo.com
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- aaron2862 - 07/20/2009
- it was exelent perfect u will get a 5
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- b0NitA_bAby - 07/15/2009
- awesome
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- Mc_lank - 07/09/2009
- nice poet
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- xxxemo-princess666xxx - 02/03/2009
- its boring. it shudnt b a story, its a poem, u write the basic idea n message in the least ammount of words needed n thats it. also u hav typos n no commas or any othr form of punctuation..idk y that person tht last commented thot it was good....
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- Bounty Hunter Toshiro - 12/17/2008
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GREAT POEM!!!!!
THIS WAS AN ENCHANTING POEM.
IT WAS A PLEASURE READING. - Report As Spam