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The cryptic melody moving you forward
into the world you never thought you'd see.
The haunted sound,
just below your feet ,
you always hated never to hear,
You ridicule and shun,
spitting curses
until you hear it.
Until you are trapped and forced to listen.
The more you hate, the more you hear.
Unable to comprehend the tainting noise.
So close
it's in your head.
Invading your being.
You hate it so much,
it's become surreal.
The sense leaves you.
Darkness blinds your eyes,
music pulsates in your brain.
Then when all reason has left you
sinking into a red pool of hate.
You love it.
It sings to you
Until you see yourself.
Until your muscles release tension.
Until your vision becomes clear.
It has become you,
And you have become it.
Your music no one understands.
- by Burutani Kasai |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Sound
- Artist: Burutani Kasai
- Description: I wrote this for my Creative writing class. I just started writing and this is what happened after extensive editing... Poems have many meanings and I would spoil it for you all if I told you my personal meaning to it, so hope you like it.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: sound music anime love hate
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Comments (5 Comments)
- savage-curt - 06/03/2009
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What ever that was fruitey i ant get one word you said........
SIKE!
I lover it
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- Lady Durane - 05/15/2009
- nice smile what they said
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- o0 violet 0o - 04/15/2009
- nice! n_n
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- TeiIei - 01/11/2009
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nice
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- jesanndei - 12/17/2008
- nice......i do beleive that music can really control yourself.
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