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Gleeful tearing noise
Stops before the mess settles
Oh joy, a sweater.
- Title: Yay presants!
- Artist: Kenosaki
- Description: A short Haiku about Christmas morning.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas morning presants
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Comments (6 Comments)
- GoIdKoin - 11/01/2009
- i would use somthing other than a sweater
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- Rozomund - 07/28/2009
- its ngreat for a haiku and i experienced difficulty making the so u ROCK and i love ur avatar.
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- S3xyGirl01 - 07/15/2009
- Sorry,but I have 2 say its a Thumb's Down...its just 2 short and it really doesn't have a point
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- xX_MiStReSsOfThENight_Xx - 04/30/2009
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eh u cood do better
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- chelsiebelle - 12/31/2008
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IT'S A HAIKU!!!!!! IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE SHORT!!!!
God! Really, what is wrong with people? I like it. Is it meant to be a little satirical? XD "Oh joy, a sweater." Lol. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Chicken My Nugget - 12/21/2008
- boring too short add more details BOO!!!!! THUMBS DOWN
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