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Happiness only pulls you into an empty and deadly sorrow.
It turns you into an irreversible living lust.
Something you can never change.
Its eats you from the inside,
Straight to the out.
People wonder whats wrong,
You turn and shy them away.
You bottle up these emotions,
And hang your head low.
You keep walking,
With no real goal.
You never stop,
Your life is now empty.
You are trapped in this void,
of emptiness,
sadness,
hatred,
and vengeance.
You cry for redemption,
Yet it will never come.
You have been forsaken.
Trapped in a memory lost forever.
So you keep on walking,
For the rest of eternity...
- by Xx_Sexxi_Waffles_xX |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Deadly Sorrow
- Artist: Xx_Sexxi_Waffles_xX
- Description: I make a lot of poems, heres a little one I made a while ago. And remember, poems dont have to rhyme! ^^
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: deadly sorrow
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Xaiichi17 - 11/23/2009
- 1/5 since this has nothing to do with the holidays. Otherwise I would have given it a 3/5.
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- Lord suki9 - 08/02/2009
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cool
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- fairychix111106 - 05/12/2009
- very nice... i like this one...
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- Xx-butterskkybuddy-xX - 12/20/2008
- omg wow that kinda killed the christmas spirit but i give it a 4
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