-
Eyes glisten
Moon shines
Snow falls gently
Trees and snow binds
Snowmen stand
Icicles form
Trees a plenty
Hot chocolate warm
Bells jingle
Santa is here
In his sleigh
With his reindeer
- by Hinata-Hinamori |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: Christmas Eve
- Artist: Hinata-Hinamori
- Description: Another random one. Pretty good I guess!
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas evening snowmen santa
- Report Post
Comments (6 Comments)
- sour_appletini44 - 07/09/2009
-
I love the poem!! it rymes very nicecly! I liek all the describing words usedit makes the poem like 30 times better!! smile Over the poem is amazing to Me!
- Report As Spam
- aha i hacked u - 03/28/2009
- nice, i like it but i think the poem could use a little more ryming but over all its great! 4/5
- Report As Spam
- Lucien Vox - 03/11/2009
- i like it
- Report As Spam
- xX_Forgotten_Wish_xX - 02/08/2009
- very nice
- Report As Spam
- Hinata-Hinamori - 01/01/2009
- Thanks! :3
- Report As Spam
- XxRawrSoraxX - 01/01/2009
- that was good
- Report As Spam