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Padded rooms echo loudly
tab While unmoving people race,
tab tab With skewed looks like hunted beasts
tab tab tab Crimson falls flow down the face.
tab tab tab tab Saturated cotton weeps
tab tab tab tab tab As life's liquid leaves it's stain,
tab tab tab tab tab tab Frozen lakes strive to compare
tab tab tab tab tab tab tab Through an apathetic rain.
tab tab tab tab tab tab tab tab Bitter tastes within the mouth
tab tab tab tab tab tab tab tab tab Final breaths escape a flood.
- Title: IMPACt
- Artist: J2G
- Description: I wrote this my Sophomore year of High School for an English project, but I liked it a lot and it actually got a really good grade. It may seem morbid and dark, but it's like that for a reason. I used a lot of symbolism and colors play a big part. Please don't just read it, feel it.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: impact
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Peridot Tears - 09/10/2010
- I'm not very good in poetry, but...this certainly does have a wet -- for lack of a better word -- and...echoing quality to it. The pace is pretty good, and you definitely put in good expression with the visuals and colors.
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- aleki chan - 08/06/2009
- wow that is really good
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- Master_stronghold1212 - 06/05/2009
- very good brravo
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- Thorn Of The Sky - 12/29/2008
- Wow amazing.......Im actualy speechless people may call me crazy but I love that poem.
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- Hells Winged Angel - 12/15/2008
- erm...luck with that
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