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It's a dark night, dim light.
Little Annie, with her kind Granny.
"Dear Santa, sorry no milk, but Fanta.
Sorry, cookies not, for we have boycott.
I wish for a doll, they ran out at the mall.
Please and thanks then, From Little Ann Hen.
- Title: Annies Wish
- Artist: lllIIl
- Description: Little annie with her grandmas help, letter/note to Santa
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: santa
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Yellow_Sunshines51 - 03/20/2010
- it rymes alot and i love it
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- DeadRose98 - 04/23/2009
- so coooollll
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- baby dolls22 - 02/24/2009
- i thought it was good
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- Dr Makai - 01/28/2009
- I liked it. Poem was structured, grammar was good, it had a dark and light reference throughout. Poverty stricken Annie. Encore 5/5
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- heart_of_a_butterfly - 01/11/2009
- um its ok not horrable but good could be better
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