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She cries
She cries
She closed her eyes
She cried
She cried
Alone as she died
She fell
She fell
Into her own personal Hell
Cold and alone
With no house
With no home
She was cut down to the bone
As she died all alone
It wasn't fair
It wasn't fair
How no one seemed to care
- by AndromedaStCyr |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Alone
- Artist: AndromedaStCyr
- Description: A poem that was originally a song I wrote about a year ago. It's a little sad but it's how I felt at the time. Like it or hate it, I don't care, I just had to tell how it was for me back then.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: alone
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The_Pharoah_of_Twilight - 11/19/2009
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i absouluty love it...seriously, its sad yet its cute...you really put your foot in this one...damn,, if only if only..if only looks could kill...lol
a total 5/5
btw im soooooo stealing this... rofl - Report As Spam
- Foxiimaru - 06/27/2009
- ^^
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- ninja yumi789 - 05/30/2009
- cute
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- xx-pancakes101-xx - 04/04/2009
- best one so far keep up the good work good luck
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- mai mai 17 - 03/13/2009
- great poem
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- adek_wolf - 02/19/2009
- really good! kudos!
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- Count Xander - 01/23/2009
- Wow. Such emotion...I love it.
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