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My love
Why did you die?
How come?
Why did you have to die to save us all?
I'm now so sad
I'm crying,and greiving
I can't take this
You were mine,now your gone
How did this happen?
Why did it have to be me to kill you for us?
This is not right
This is not fair
I can't go on without you....
I'm sitting here crying,looking at the stars
I'm sitting here,watching you go
You said you loved me,before you left me
You left me,your gone, forever more
All thats left,is a seed
Goodbye forever,I'll miss you so
I'm still sitting here,crying
Goodbye......
- by Messy Tails |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Death Of My Love
- Artist: Messy Tails
- Description: This is something thats been stuck in my head scine i watched Cosmo die on sonic x.Its so sad and is inspired by the death of Tails' love,Cosmo.And was inspired by my thoughts of how sad death is.This is also a poem.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: death love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Neon Bones - 02/19/2010
- Awww~ I remember that episode. Good job, Messy Tails. ^^ I like it, at first, before I read the description, I thought while reading, "Why does this remind me of that Sonic X episode in season 3 when Cosmo dies...?" And it's funny, it was about Cosmo and Tails. So I think it's good, you're a great writer, Messy Tails! smile
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- VivaLaVidaClock - 07/19/2009
- So sad!
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- Rainbows Reign - 07/06/2009
- It was okay. It had good content, but no base. I'm not a fan of freeform. You're a great writer, but add more, well, stuff to it. I mean, freeform is something you could do anything with, and i would love to see a rhyming version of this. But it was sad and I liked it. So, yeah.
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- Rockstar1 Rules - 05/01/2009
- That pome is really good and sad i like it
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- Sarah6550 - 03/09/2009
- That's so sad and romantic at the same time...
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