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The snow falls heavily amongst the tree,
And it decorates the folage gentily,
Splendoring the scene festivly.
Wishes float on by,
Whispered by people who dare to try,
Hoping that the season doesn't go awry.
People stop to enjoy the moment,
Their minds dormant
As they soak in nearby carolers preachment.
Oh yes, Christmas is here
So many cohere
For the season as it adheres.
Have a very merry Christmas, Navidad or Pasco
I hope that your gift giving time isn't a fiasco!
- by Candy Cane Bunny |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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Comments (2 Comments)
- luckydraco - 02/19/2009
- i like it, however i did find that the rhyming every line made it a little destracting to its purpace. its a good effort however 4/5. (just a little bit of frendly critique which i hope can hel you in the future ^^)
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- kittman11 - 01/02/2009
- ur one of the perfects i have read so 5/5
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