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Stores are closed, ornaments are strung, paper is ripping, stockings are sifted through, bows and ribbons thrown on the floor, while I order Chinese food.
- by GO_muffinz |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: A Jewish Family on Christmas
- Artist: GO_muffinz
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Description:
The reason it says"while I order Chinese food" is cuz Chinese food is the only thing open on Christmas. Yes I am Jewish, and yes I always order Chinese food on Christmas ( not that it's really important). I was bored so I wrote this. I'm not much of a poet (as you can tell), this is also my first time entering in the arena.
XD! - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: jewish family christmas
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Wolf_grl_89 - 10/04/2010
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its a good try then.
You have potential.
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- beautiful_richy - 06/29/2009
- hats off and to everyone else waz up
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- KorriiChan - 05/28/2009
- Its ok i guess but could have been a lot better.
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- xXNamiHinaXx - 04/22/2009
- uhhh sorry it's not that great but at least you tried 3
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- Emsuco - 03/10/2009
- Ugh, she could do much better. Nice try though!
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- grunnyluv4evah - 01/19/2009
- Sorry, not very 'in depth' 2
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- UltraFairy666 - 01/12/2009
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Actually I liek it, it's not like a lot of the poems on here that try too hard to be 'poetic' and to have all these linguistic devices and stuff.
It's honest and yeah it's short, yeah the presentation could be better, but so? It's cool... - Report As Spam
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