-
Breaking Away
Breaking away,
I'm falling to peices,
Like a puzzle I lie,
Scattered and hidden,
Yet so plain to see,
Will you help pick me up?
Be there as a beam,
someone I can trust,
and help me threw this feeling?
Breaking away,
but yet so much together,
This Jigsaw isn't so hard to peice together,
I'm waiting, so silently,
Waiting for you,
Will you be there?
At the end of it all,
I can see your siloette,
yet you're not much closer,
Is this just a tease, or are you here to help me?
Finally I see you, Am I being uplifted?
I can see the final peice being placed in,
I fell so much better,
Thank you, my dear friend.
Thank you.
- by IndecisiveWolk |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: Breaking away
- Artist: IndecisiveWolk
- Description: It's not really ment to be Depressing, more like... Well I'm not sure. It came from the top of my little head. I wrote it down, and it seems okay. I hope you all like it.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: breaking away
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- Figa_sk8er - 03/30/2009
-
That's soooooooo cool
I like it
I really like it!!
Keep up the good work! - Report As Spam
- caoimhe7 - 02/15/2009
- coollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll i thinc its cool
- Report As Spam
- roku135 - 01/23/2009
- i agree with vulturi this is the best
- Report As Spam
- Black Skitz - 12/30/2008
-
this is the BEST i have read so far... im sorry to say not everyone on gaia has a brain... but clearly you do! nice work!!!!
i WOULD give you a 20 but it doesnt go that far... so here is the best, and keep on creating great poetry 5/5 - Report As Spam