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She cries out,
In desperation.
Wishing
She had more time.
Falls to the floor,
Pale,
White as snow.
Stopped breathing,
A heap by the door.
Fading
Her memories
Gone.
Still as snow.
Daughter finds
Mother on the floor.
Hoping
She wouldn't cry.
Life
Cold as snow.
Gets out pen,
Some notebook paper.
Writing
'Santa,' sadly.
Child
Pretty as snow.
'I hope you
Can get me just one
Special
Present. Where she's at,
It's
White as snow?
'Make sure my
Mommy is safe in
Heaven.
All I want for
Christmas.
Unpredictable as snow.'
As the girl
Grows into a young
Woman,
She thinks of her
Mother,
Innocent as snow.
Why did she
Have to go, she could
Have stayed.
Crying in the sleet.
Oddly
Sad like snow.
Her wedding
Day neared, dress silky
And fine.
Walking down the aisle
-Thinking of her mom-
Pure,
-Picturing her mom, right there
White as snow.
- by hadrosaurid |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: White as Snow
- Artist: hadrosaurid
- Description: This was just something made up right on the spot (so it won't win. =P). I tried to make the syllables match after each verse, so that's why it doesn't rhyme. >>' And I think I got a little off topic somewhere. xD Anywho, Merry Christmas to everyone! (By the way, in the last verse, the words in Italics are there because she's thinking that. =3)
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: white snow
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Neko Puppet - 03/10/2010
- This made me wanna cry.....5/5....
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- I-Kawaii Kiore-I - 12/23/2008
- wow, i really like this entry!!! thats rare!!! 10/5 biggrin
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- bloodyrosebrokenheart - 12/14/2008
- Yeh that is deep. But like your stories, good!
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- Kool Aidan - 12/13/2008
- Whoa. I think that's what you'd call 'deep'. XD This is pretty good. I hope you win. biggrin
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