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Nothingness
no thought
no feeling
no emotion
Simply darkness
The steady form with no life upon it
Began to flow and transform
and was given life
The darkness was soon banished
and the numerous creatures were given knowledge
Crystals placed to keep balance
granting a prosperity like no other
which was shattered
by hunger for more
which led to conflict among the creatures
with no other choice
the crystals shattered
and the world crumbled
creating separate smaller worlds
with smaller crystals to keep order
A final world was born
housing the primes
that were in the guise of spirit
who wandered to each world
to preserve order
This final world
also had inhabitants
who now threaten it's
stability
If it falls
so does the rest
Here is where we begin...
- by Sorrel Andante |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Prologue
- Artist: Sorrel Andante
- Description: This is poem is related to the story I'm working on. This one is about the beginning of the world in which it's set. The story is a fantasy so bear with me.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: prologue dawn story fantasy
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ii Ma Raison D Etre - 06/18/2009
- D; this is not really to do with holidays!
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- kutchiyaya - 06/18/2009
- not really good if i were u i would make it shorter but good job
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- princess forte - 05/15/2009
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OMG your poem is so..so...so... beautifull i like it so much keep making a beautifull poem again okay and keep moving wink
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- shazy gal - 02/18/2009
- niceness!!!
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- GrinBunnies - 12/31/2008
- nice XD
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