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To my Dearest Rosaline,
With all of mine I cherish your every heartbeat.
Without you, my life would be empty, like the night sky missing the moon and it's stars.
With every breath you take my love deepens for thee.
Your compassion, your love and warm smile melt my stone-cold heart and rekindle my will to continue my existance on this miserable and broken world.
To remember what love truly is.
That love is behind thw face and inside the heart.
Your love is what i truley desire
It is what keeps my ravashing hunger from reawakening.
Your love is all I could ever want and more.
My Dearest Rosaline,
I will love thee from dusk till dawn.
Until this world crumbles beneath our feet.
Until the sun darkens and every last star has fallen from the night's sky.
Untill I have left my place among the living and passed beyond the Veils of Life and into the Kindom of Eternal Souls.
I will love thee forever more.
- by DragonFly-Tattoo |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: To my dearest Rosaline
- Artist: DragonFly-Tattoo
- Description: Just to let everyone know this is part of the book I am currently writing. It's about a vampire <I started this book before Twilight> and he is writing a love letter to his beloved. Please, feel free to comment and critic, but refrain from trashing it. Honest opinions are good but I would prefer gentle critiquing. Also if you have any ideas or questions on my book feel free to comment my page or to pm me ^.^
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: dearest rosaline love vampire
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ii Mz_flY_thANg ii - 06/29/2009
- YOOR POEM WAS REAEALY AWSOME.holidaYZ ROC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Wolf _Anime _Lover - 03/07/2009
- hey nice lovely poem,but its a holiday contest and your poem is lovely and a love poem.um i think ur not following instructions. P.s. OMG!! I LOVE YOUR POEM THOUGH!!! smile
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- Shikaku Rin - 03/01/2009
- Seriously, this is a holiday contest. You get a 1/5 for not following instructions. Although the poem was alright. I can't say that like it. Its way too sappy and truthfully childish to be written by a vampire, unless he is newly turned or really a child. I'm sorry if I am harsh but that is what I feel when i read the poem.
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- toxic enchantment - 12/16/2008
- Aww...such a beautiful piece of writing. I could feel the love. You have a way with words, Kat. smile
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- EK Acid Test - 12/15/2008
- OH MY GOD!!! THIS IS A BLEEDING HOLIDAY CONTEST! HOLIDAYS. HOLIDAY. DAYS OF HOLI. NOT A FLIPPING FREE-FOR-ALL.
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