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He had to go to a far away land.
It was hidden in sand.
It was somewhere in the east.
He kissed his girlfriend good-bye.
He’d thought about how she’d cry.
War was a beast.
He got on the ship.
Away his mind would slip.
War made people mad.
He made new friends.
Good times there had been.
He would lose everything he had.
There was blood all around.
It covered the ground.
His buddies were gone.
He heard the sirens sound.
The Lts. orders were drowned.
The chaos ended at dawn.
After the bomb has been dropped.
The war had stopped.
The troops returned home.
His mind was intact.
He wished his friends could come back.
He was alone.
- by animefreak120 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: War
- Artist: animefreak120
- Description: This is a poem I wrote about the war in Iraq. This is my opinion of what war is. I realize that sometimes we have to fight, and I'm very thankful that we have troops who can protect us, but it still doesn't make war any better or less painful.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: wariniraq wars
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Comments (7 Comments)
- DementedAngel13993 - 02/02/2011
- wrong section! 1/5 sorry.. if this was in writing, auto 5/5 tho
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- Wolf_grl_89 - 10/04/2010
- its great, an very emotional, but sadly, it is in the wrong area.
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- o_OEverlastingStarO_o - 06/04/2009
- Unrelated
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- angeldiane - 03/04/2009
- Holidays/Christmas??
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- car3b34r5 - 01/15/2009
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Very good.It shows your emotions about the war in iraq,how you think they'd feel.
I'd give you a 99999/5 (if I Could razz ) - Report As Spam
- Apocalyptic Beatdown - 12/18/2008
- after all, that is the tru spirit of christmas....no wait...am i in the wrong forum? ooh, no its u...thought i was going crazy for a second
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- Faye_Dawn_Shiori - 12/13/2008
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That's very good.
I give it a 100000000000/5. :3 - Report As Spam