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Two gentle lovers
sitting on the couch,
watching the snowflakes
fall.
They watch as the snowflakes
kiss the barren earth,
her trees,
and her leaves,
leaving a white stain
in their path.
What wonderful a match,
the snow,
and the earth,
one always falling, and kissing,
the other always catching, and receiving.
Then those two lovers realize,
they could fall, and kiss
no other,
that they would catch and receive
no other,
and that their love is as pure as the falling,
kissing,
snow.
Two gentle lovers,
snuggled on the couch,
watch their love fall
like tiny snowflakes,
which grow into a small storm,
and have it turn into
a wild,
but beautiful,
blizzard.
- Title: Winter
- Artist: Miztea
- Description: It's about two lovers watching the snowfall on a cold wintry day- think blankets and chestnuts... I said lovers, so not to discriminate lol...it's an old poem...done for school last year...enjoy!
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: winter lovers snowfall
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Poisonous Desire - 08/17/2009
- not bad
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- Virtual Lanny - 06/16/2009
- mmm....
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- cuterhian15 - 05/12/2009
- how sweet poem..
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- scandalosa - 12/16/2008
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very sensual and dynamic
good word choice and pairing
"beautiful blizzard"
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