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The snow slowly drifts down from the sky as I sit and await my love,
This is the season to not be alone,
Yet here I sit by the window,
Watching the snowflakes fall just like the smile from my face.
Time seems to pass endlessly as the snow continues to drift down from Heaven,
As each flake lands my heart longs to see you.
I watch for a sign, a flicker of hope, anything to keep the flame in my heart warm.
When will you return to me?
Soon, snow covers the ground and I am left by the window wondering where you are?
The lights on the tree twinkle in the background like flickers of hope,
Hope which sustains me and keeps me by the window watching for you.
On this snowy night, I hope you are safe and warm.
I hope you'll come to me soon and renew the flame in my heart.
Please, Please come and sit with me and watch the snow fall.
Keep me warm and give me the only thing I need this Christmas,
You......
- by Crazed TV Girl18 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Snowy Night
- Artist: Crazed TV Girl18
- Description: Inner thoughts of someone missing their loved one on a snowy winter day....
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: snowy night love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- KuroKageHane - 12/22/2010
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I like it! :3 There is something about it that gives off a vibe of longing for one other.
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- Kishin_Mistress - 06/15/2009
- i like it!5/5,the guy who commented before me is kinda insulting me
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- MAKIN_new_ACCOUNT - 04/25/2009
- nice poem wasnt to long wasnt to short good to know there are uprising people who have potential ^^
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- HyperNeji - 03/15/2009
- its sweet like the morning dew of a fully grown rose!
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- TaeTae546 - 12/22/2008
- thats a pretty neat poem
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