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- | Submitted on 11/27/2009 |
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- Title: The Old Doll
- Artist: HoshikoKei
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Description:
Do you remember
that old doll?
The one you used to take to bed
when you were a child?
The one you tucked away
with your bunny rabbit
your old kite
your children's books
when you said
"I'm too old for this now."
Her yarn hair is dusty now
her dress is spattered with grime
her sewn-up skin is tattered, torn
and her button eyes glimmer dully
from beneath ashen cobwebs.
(Sorry, I'm not much of a poet ^^; Constructive criticism is appreciated <3) - Date: 11/27/2009
- Tags: doll childhood toys children
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Dyrimna - 12/06/2009
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Very interesting and original. I love it! 5/5
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- Emo Kuromi Nui - 12/02/2009
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5/5 Very creative~
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- Student of 7th Sphere - 12/02/2009
- one of more creative ones I seen so far. 4.7/5
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- Alkaizer87 - 12/02/2009
- Very original I saw the title and the avi I'm like," eoe that really does look old." Then I saw the description and made me think of Chocolate, a medium sized brown teddy bear Ihad when I was like 6. I used to hug it and go to sleep. Even now I can't go to sleep right away unless I hug something. I misss Chocolate. 20/5
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- HoshikoKei - 12/01/2009
- Thanks guys! ^_^
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- Dracte - 12/01/2009
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Wonderful background creation, it really adds to the avatar.
Goodluck this week! - Report As Spam
- Onomonomono - 12/01/2009
- 5/5
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