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- Title: Miraeilth
- Artist: Heaven_Leigh_Treasure
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Description:
As I walked soft, in Ravenswood,
through light and dappled shade.
A tall old oak, in sunlight stood,
within this forest glade.
And taking time, to sit and watch,
beside the rattling stream.
A sight so wondrous did I catch,
I feared it was a dream.
For there within the clearing round,
beneath the guardian tree,
danced Elfin children o’er the ground,
in laughter, wild and free.
- Tony Wraight
- Date: 05/01/2011
- Tags: miraeilth heavenleightreasure
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Comments (3 Comments)
- dats so fetch - 05/02/2011
- it'll be better with green on the bottom.. but other then that. 5/5 Goodluck!<3
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- Baron_Jark - 05/02/2011
- Stunning as usual. And so beautifully green. I particularly like the inclusion of the tree in the background. Perhaps the only thing that gave me pause was the bluish tone at the bottom of the skirt, but then I'm a very pedantic person who just prefers to see avi's match/ balance colours exact...I'm awarding it 5 because it's wonderful. I really dug the poem as well. Seriously it's seeing entries like this that REALLY inspire and make me all the more anxious to enter myself.
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- [Techi] - 05/02/2011
- Good luck HLT! 5'd for sure, this is as good as always
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