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Ch 3: What The Hell Is Going On???
They had to stop because of a extremely big pit in the middle of the forest. They looked in the pit. Winry screamed and fell backward Pat caught her before she fell to the ground.
Tylor: "What the ******** is the pit full of blood for? Oh my ******** god!"
Pat: "I don't know but its very creepy."
"oh my god it also has all the fruit and animals in into wonder why we couldn't find anything. ********."
Winry starts to wake up. They tell her what they saw. She went hysterical and insane. She kept saying she wanted to go home
"I want to go ******** home why the hell did I ******** have to go on that dumb boat trip oh my ******** god let me go ill swim home I if I have to let me go"
After a while she clamed down. They went back to the beach to try and catch some fish to or something and figure things out. Pat went fishing while Tylor watched Winry so she didn't try and swim away to her death. After about an hour Pat caught about 6 fish for them to eat. Tylor stared to make a fire to cook the fish. While they were waiting for the fish to cook they started to talk about what they talked about the situation.
Pat: "we have to find a way to get off this island; we might have to build our own boat when can look threw the stuff that washed up to shore from the boat to see if you can use anything to help with us doing that."
Tylor: "fine we can do that but as long as we do it quickly because I'm starting to feel bad for Winry"
Winry: "What the hell you don't have to worry about me. Ill be fine on the island its just seeing a big huge pool of blood is a little creepy. Your just trying to flirt me and its not going to work."
"What? Why don't you want cuddle with me? Why dose Pat get all the attention and feelings for you? It anit fair."
"Well I'm sorry Pat is just more my type and he aint no ******** perv like you."
Pat: "Alright everyone be quite. Winry why don't you just stay off me before me and Tylor get in to a fight ok?"
"Alright."
The fish was done so they started to eat quickly with just few evil stares.
Ch 4: What I Thought Was A Silent Walk.
As the day has ended Pat and Tylor had started to have a feud as Winry went off t have some peace and quite.
Tylor: "What the ******** you don't have to make her get off you I can get her to came to me eventually."
Pat: "Oh shut the ******** up. No you wouldn't have she don't like you because you're a perv. Your just jealous because you want some a** and she is the only girl here and she wont give you any."
They started to punch at each other. Winry was walking along side the beach when she heard strange noises bye where the boys were. She ran back. She screamed.
"Stop it you ******** idiots. "
They stopped and looked at her and pushed each other off of each other. Tylor walked up to her an gave her a kiss she pushed him, slapped him, and kneed him n the balls.
"Leave me the ******** alone ok? I don't want you so ******** live with it."
Tylor just walked off Pat went to Winry to help calm her down. As the time went on Pat and Winry began to make-out as Tylor walked off into the night.
- by Christina M I A |
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- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: mysterious end part 2
- Artist: Christina M I A
- Description: this is the good part of the story where it gets intresting lol and if you wanna read ch. 5 just ask in comment. thats a lil nasty but i think the guys might like it more XD
- Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: fictionendstory
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Comments (2 Comments)
- RubyXMatthew - 12/20/2008
- yeah shes right
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- Julia Dream - 07/19/2008
- I think you're a bit too fond of the word &********; - I mean, I know people who say it a lot, but every one of your characters seems to say it in every other sentence. Also, you need to work on punctuation/capitalization, and your sentences are kind of choppy, and you should never used the (Character): script-form of speech designation when writing a story.
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