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CHAPTER1:
The only thing that makes me happy is my dreams.When i think about the real life i cry inside.My name is kiki mio i live in small town whith happy people,I know they are dying in ther hearts deap down.For me happy is a joke.I have no friends and im ok whith that.The sad thing is my own mother dosen`t know who i am inside and for some reason im okay whith it.So i dream to have a better live.when i grow up i whant to make the world a lot better,not like a hippie.
- by chickabiddi |
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- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: life
- Artist: chickabiddi
- Description: a young girl dreams of a better wourld
- Date: 07/24/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Bebe Girl - 07/31/2009
- WoW! It sounds like you were describing me...scary...
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- Arisa Wilder - 07/26/2008
- So, like, good concept, but perhaps a little less telling and a little more doing. Also, pay attention to grammar and basic conventions.
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- loner gurl12 - 07/25/2008
- interesting.go for wat u dream for
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