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The last thing Sara Remara remembered was jumping from a plane. Then every thing went a little fuzzy. She had a vague suspicion that the glowing blue,black,and purple disk type thing that opened up beneath her was no ordinary delusion, which leads her to her current situation. Falling towards the ground with a parachute that wont open. The useless piece of junk!! She did what any sensible person would do. She freaked out. Screamed till her throat was sore while her mind silently bombarded her with questions, and pointless truths. What the heck was that? Oh my god I'm going to die!!
Tears streamed back towards her ears or they would have if the high velocity she was plummeting towards the ground at hadn't dried them the instant they where shed. After a few moments of useless panic she more or less came to terms with her fate. Ok so I'm going to die. At least I'm going to go doing something I love. Sure I have questions that I wont get answers to. Like how the heck did the desert I was sky diving over turn into jungle?? The last one came as the trees became a little clearer.
- by kationa rumani |
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- | Submitted on 10/18/2008 |
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- Title: Dragons boon (part one)
- Artist: kationa rumani
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Description:
The story of a dragon and a girl..To her surprise she finds she should have taken a deal offered by the dragon but didn't and now she finds she is a piece of his treasure to the shape shifting dragon king.........This could get funny...Read as she attempts to escape and or drive her new owner crazy..Who knows maybe annoying the dragon will get him to free her..or get her eaten....Darn she should have taken the deal!!!
- Date: 10/18/2008
- Tags: dragons boon portals jumping flying
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Comments (3 Comments)
- aoshi_tenshii - 01/29/2013
- aww that sucks you have no fans, I loved reading all chapters of dragons boon
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- kationa rumani - 11/06/2008
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Ok so I'm down sizing this story and making multiple posts cuz I realized it was kind of long to read and yeah, I'm not the best of writers I realize this..with all the typos and things like that so I am having pity on you the readers!!!! So several smaller posts it is.
ummm thanks for understanding even though I have no fans *Hugs her self is shame!!!* sniff!!!! sniff!!!! - Report As Spam
- W00tification - 10/18/2008
- HOLY CRUDCAKES. spacing. All I can see is two huge paragraphs. Nothing more, it makes it less appealing to read. please space your paragraphs and make several because it looks like you have several runons. Read the story again and get some actual pacing and spacing ^^; that rhymes hehe. But trust me it will attract more readers if you take some time to detail it out.
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