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Vivian ran down the street towards her apartment. She flew down the street racing the comming sun.
her twin sister Rayin sat in the living room waiting for her return.
"What took you so long Viv. The sunlight almost got you."Rayin said teasingly. "oh be quiet, you don't have to avoid the sun like i do." Vivan irritatedly replyed. anger danced across her midnight blue eyes. Vivan stomed up to her room and slamed the door.
somebodies not in a very good mood, thought Rayin.
Vivan sat by the mirror in her room and ran a brush thought her shoulder length ebony black hair. Then carefully brushing the blood red lengths of hair that went down to her waist.
Rayin doesn't know what it's like to have to avoid sunlight. she just thinks it's all fun and games. she is so annoyingly inconsiderate.Vivian thought bitterly. she sat the brush down on the oak table and walked across the room to her bed. she layed down on top of the blankets and stared at the maroon colored walls. she stared at the drawings she had done of the town at night, so dark and deserted. she layed there as she heard the door shut and wished her insamnia would let her sleep.
Rayin ran out the door into the street and gazed at the newly lit town. she walked down the street smelling the freash morning dew. she heard the birds sing their happy morning songs. and saw the flowers opening up for the warm sun.
she continued walking untill she came to a park near a butifull waterfall. she diped her toes in the water and wached the fish swim around.
she stared at her reflection.
she look at her glittery dark natrual red hair that reached her shoulders. and the long lengths of hair that reached her waist were a light natural red. she looked at her grass green eyes. Her lightly taned skin.
she smiled thinking she was probubly one of the prettyest girls in town. untill reality hit. she stared at her refection and saw her fangs. her stupid fangs, she though, they scare everyone away. Vivian's lucky she doesn't have to worry about people running from her, no ones ever out when she is.
Rayin got up and walked down the path around the lake. she came to a waterfall and stoped.
she could smell something in the air, a human like smell, yet it wasn't
she walked through the waterfall to a cave on the other side
the smell was stronger
she hid in the shadows and looked around. she saw a boy about her age sitting on a ledge. He looked up at her, his ash blond hair and pale skin shone it the sunlight that slipped through the cracks. she looked into his iceblue eyes. he was the first to speak: who are you?
he said in a curious kind of way.
rayin anwsered: I am Rayin Cruentus. who are you?
the boy resonded: I am Jess Dolor, i came here last night looking for a place to sleep.
rayin: there is a hotel down on Hills street
Jess: maybe i'll take a look
they continued talking for hours untill Rayin noticed that the sun was setting
Rayin: I have to go the sun is setting. will you meet me here tomorow?
Jess: yes
rayin ran down the street as fast as she could
she was in such a hurry that she didn't even notice someone was following her...
to be continued in part 2 of blood and
moonlight
- by dark_moonlight_girl321 |
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- | Submitted on 12/17/2008 |
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- Title: Blood And Moonlight: part 1
- Artist: dark_moonlight_girl321
- Description: the beginig to a story i'm writing, please comment
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: blood moonlight vampire
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Skadi Sundermount - 01/20/2009
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Why do the characters
Talk: Like this?
some pretty nice imagry there but occaisonally redudant. Try mixing it up a bit. - Report As Spam
- Dolly Akezai - 12/20/2008
- i loooooooooooveeeeeeee this!!! ^-^
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- XxMidnights Vampirexx - 12/20/2008
- OOOO I LOVE IT X 3
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- Serusa 131 - 12/17/2008
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omg i luv dis story it is so awesome
u did a fabulous job - Report As Spam
- Fayne Darkness - 12/17/2008
- good good when is the rest coming???????? pm me plz wen u did write it i like it its good
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