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Hunter ran at Erick with his sword raised up.
“I feel sad about having to kill such a pretty girl” Erick said with a smirk then two shadows shot out from under him and strait at Lilly. Hunter looked over his shoulder and saw two shadow figures holding Lilly with a knife at her throat.
Bang, Bang, Bang. Three bullets dug deep in to hunter’s chest as he started to turn towards Lilly. Hunter throws his sword at Erick. Well Hunter’s sword sliced through Erick’s stomach. Erick turned to dust, the shadow figures disappeared.
Lilly ran over to Hunter.
“HUNTER, HUNTER, HUNTER ANWER ME, HUNTER!?” Lilly screamed as she fell to her knees next to Hunter.
“D-Don’t worry about m-me, y-you got hurt,” Hunter made out in a whisper.
“Don’t worry about you, ha, you’ve got bullet holes in your chest, I only have a few scratches, and you’re telling me not to worry about you,” Lilly chuckled as she started to cry.
Three days after Hunter got shot. Hunter woke up in his family’s privet hospital; he opened his eyes slowly as he regained consciousness.
“Where am I,” he said as he sat up in the bed. He felt something on his leg; he looked at his legs well pushing the hair out of his eyes. It was Lilly, she had been sitting in a chair next to the bed when she fell asleep and leaned over on to the bed and Hunter’s leg. Hunter saw there was tear residue on Lilly’s cheek. Poor thing, she must have cried her self to sleep,” Hunter said quietly. Hunter moved to the hair on her cheek to the side, the door opened and Dr. John L. Beach walked in to the room.
“She’s been at your side all this time,” Dr. Beach said.
“She always is,” Hunter said well looking from Lilly to Dr. Beach and back.
“Indeed she is Hunter,” Dr. Beach said looking at Lilly.
“Long time no see John,” Hunter said looking back at Dr. Beach.
“It would have been two years next month, if I’m right,” said Dr. Beach.
- by rosemonster555 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/25/2008 |
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- Title: part of a story?
- Artist: rosemonster555
- Description: this is part of a story that i will write or finish writing as the case maybe.
- Date: 12/25/2008
- Tags: part story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Xethahim - 01/12/2009
- it's pretty good, the whole "Bang, bang, bang" part didn't really fit with the story, and I think you should take out the "Well" from "Well Hunter's sword sliced through Erick's stomach". Other than those two things it was pretty good...
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- Tarascosaurus- - 12/28/2008
- same with me i would like too see what happens next, btw great story
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- blah65DKCD - 12/25/2008
- wow ur good.and poor lilly, id really like to see wat happens next
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