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tab I couldn’t believe it. He didn’t deserve what happened to him; he was so young. But I was at Michael’s funeral, so I knew what had happened. What shocked me was how many people were there; his family, the priest, Haley, Derik, and I were the only ones.
tab After the funeral, I had to speak to Derik, and tell him what was on my mind. I found him, looking up at the sky, with his hands in his pockets.
tab I walked up to him, “Hey.”
tab He turned around, “Hey.”
tab “I was thinking,” I took a breath. “I was thinking that-”
tab “We should wait a while?” Derik interrupted.
tab “Ya, just until things cool down.”
tab Derik looked at me, in an understanding way, he agreed, “Ok.”
tab “So,” I held out my hand. “I guess this is goodbye…”
tab Derik shook my hand, “Goodbye.”
tab I couldn’t resist, I hugged him tight, but he didn’t let go.
tab A tear rolled down my cheek, “Bye…”
~*~*~*~
tab Well, the good news is I finished my song:
(v.1)
You left with no trace, no warning (No…)
And I used to think you didn’t want to say anything at all to me
It felt like you didn’t want me to notice you were so far, far away
You thought I would forget all about you, but you were so wrong
I cried for you for weeks, but you never came back
But then I realized life goes on
(Chorus)
You are so far away form here, and I used to miss you so dearly
But then I moved on, Oh yes I’ve moved on
I’m not crying over you anymore
So, goodbye (goodbye) goodbye
(v.2)
When I was losing hope, my friends were there to comfort me (and they said)
There are other fish in the sea, so just throw your line (and I did)
Then you finally came back with tears in your eyes (oh…)
Too bad I didn’t love you anymore
You cried for me for weeks, but I never came back
Because I realized life goes on
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
No one’s worth crying over
Sometime, you’ve got to move on
I promise you things will be alright
Just understand why your heart is saying let go
You left with no trace, no warning…
(Chorus x2)
(Goodbye x4)
I’ve decided to call it…
Goodbye
The End!!!
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I really hope you liked it!!!! blaugh redface
Plz comment and tell me what u think! 3nodding xd
- by Peace_Sign_Val |
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- | Submitted on 01/24/2009 |
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- Title: Goodbye - Part 8
- Artist: Peace_Sign_Val
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Description:
Goodbye (other than the song) it's a story I wrote for an english narrative essay.
This is Part 8....the last part....so i made it short and sweet! - Date: 01/24/2009
- Tags: goodbye part eight ending
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iSpeakerBox - 08/15/2009
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AMAZING STORY. Great writing.
I would love for it to be longer and a chapter book i would defiently but it and read it over and over again ^^ - Report As Spam
- Xx-NuMbCoMplication-xX - 07/23/2009
- I cried so much why did michael have to commit suicide T.T
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- ira_2mawar - 02/06/2009
- it's sad...
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- goldenheart8 - 02/01/2009
- It's heartbreaking. I almost cried but my sisters are here and I don't like to cry when they are here at my side. Michael never should have commited suicide and the story could have been better. 'Just a comment.'
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- XXDevilz_ChildzXX - 01/29/2009
- I read all of them your my favorite that was deep, hell I laid a tear not just her.....um...poor me
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- PtolemaeusZero - 01/29/2009
- Very emotional.... and creative!
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- Kelcey Chan - 01/25/2009
- That's Deep
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