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I walked down the road a bit, then I went into the woods. It was hard to see in the dark, and I tripped a lot. Plus, I wasn't clearheaded so that didn't help any. I was still wondering how or why Jori's mother could ever think that. Why now? Why not in the beginning of the relationship when you know the person better. Why now? I was so into my thoughts that I didn't see or was paranoid of someone close by. I have trust issues. That is why I only kissed Jiro 3 times in our relationship. I heard a twig snap. I turned around, and I saw something moving in the bushes. I started to run. I was scared. I ran until I couldn't run anymore and in desperate need for water.
Well what ever it was its gone now I thought. but I was wrong. I felt someone watching me, and my trust issues proved me right, someone was watching me. But I couldn't run again, when the thought of running came to me, I fainted. I tried to wake myself, starting from the mind and down, but I couldn't. Even though I was scared out of my mind I couldn't get myself conscious again. Something cold and wet was pouring down on my face. I immediately woke up. Trying to get has much water in my mouth has possible.
"Hello," somebody said. It was a strange voice, and it wasn't familiar.
"Would you like some water?" the stranger asked me.
I nodded once.
"Ok I'll be right back." I heard the stranger walkaway. It took me a minute to get my eye sight back, and also to get my eyes adjust to the darkness. The stranger came back with water, what I think is a bucket. I took the bucket and started gulping the water down. Some of the water missed my mouth and went onto my shirt. The water was cool and refreshing. When I was done, I handed the stranger his bucket. He put the bucket down and asked if I was all right. I nodded yes and said "Thank You!"
The stranger asked again if I was ok, and I said yes.
"You know I'm not really human," he said.
"Yeah I know I can tell by your voice," I responded. The stranger was not surprised.
He went on, "You know, people talked about how to change a human. They always asked 'what would happen, would it work, would they survive, etc... I'm going to try it on you." He got up, and I could see a tail. I started to get up and run, but something caught my arm. He pushed me down to the ground.
"Shhh..." he said. I wanted to scream but I knew no one would hear me. I let him lift my neck and bite into it. I screamed!
Something was going through me! My stomach felt uneasy, sick maybe. Then it got worse I was starting to get chills up and down my back. My head started to pound. The stranger laid me straight down on my back. I want to curl up in a ball but my arms and legs had to much pain in them for me to move them without screaming my head off. My heart started beating out of my chest. I thought it was going to explode! Then my chest ached, I couldn't breathe. I just wanted to die! After 3 minutes, which felt like 3 hours, my heart was beating rapidly. My body was shaking. I couldn't see anything. I couldn't get enough breath to scream, or yell. Something touched me, it burned like hell, I screamed. I thought my lungs popped. 30 minutes passed I still felt pain, lots of pain, and my heart and my head got worse! I think my heart was transforming into something, but what? and my head pounded worse than before. This happened for 2 hours until my body started settling down, but it was on a little. It was easier to catch my breath now. Another hour has passed and my body still ached but I almost could breathe normally. OOOwwww....!!!!! now my back ached! I had chills and something growing out from under my skin! Damn...I wanted too scream so badly. 5 hours went by. Finally my back started to ease up. My breathing was still the same has before, but my arms and legs didn't feel soo bad anymore. 3 hours passed my heart rate started to slow down. My arms and legs were only numb now. My back was numb too and the chills got smaller and smaller. My breathing started to ease a little. 10 hours passed. Everything got better My breathing, heart, legs and arms, my head, and my back and everything else.
That’s strange I can smell everything, the trees, air, a person or an animal's scent, and I could hear everything! bugs, the wind, a person breathing, its heart beat, EVERYTHING! It took me awhile to open my eyes and look around. When I did I saw 'him', the stranger, the person who done this to me. He had a tail, and a pair of ears, not human, and whiskers on his face. I still couldn't move so I used my eyes and my new sense of smell, and my super sonic hearing to see where I was, and what was happening around me. When I looked at the Stranger again he sighed in relief. He looked relieved that I was ok, and that I lived. Probably for his glorious, selfishness to become famous that he proved a human can be turned into...well I don't know exactly what I actually turned into. For 2 more hours there was no pain, my breathing was back to normal but more heavy now, and my hearted stopped beating rapidly, but my heart did change I can feel it. After all the pain went away I just wants to sleep. The stranger was confused, like he heard something that wasn't there, or a little voice from out of nowhere just said something to him.
Then he said, " then sleep then. Sweet Dreams." and then I was confused, I didn't say nothing, or did I? Wait no I definitely thought that I wanted to sleep, I didn't actually say that with my mouth. Oh whatever I was to tired to figure anything out. I closed my eyes, and I felt the ground slide under me. I was being carried by the Stranger. After a few seconds I was fast asleep.
- by Olivia Anderson |
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- | Submitted on 05/13/2009 |
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- Title: Bitten Blood Chap 3
- Artist: Olivia Anderson
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I put Chap 3 and Chap 4 together. - Date: 05/13/2009
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- Sweet aiden - 05/18/2009
- that was freaky but i like it so good job
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