Love and Nerves part II

• Artist: Sassi_suicide
• Description: It's gotten more complicted!
• Date: 05/18/2009
• Tags: love nerves part2

I could feel my heart beating faster and faster until......

I passed out. I a woke in the nurces office with a ice pack on my head. All I saw was blurry images of a guy. I didn't know who until I heard his voice. "Hey Iris are you okay, you passed out", said my friend Zak. Zak was kinda chubby but he was sweet. He had ask me out like seven times. I didn't want to hurt his feelings but I didn't know him that much. "Why are you here?" I asked. "I'm the nurces helper" he said. As I lay on the bed I felt totally stupid.

Once I left the office I started looking for my friends. "Ahhhhh!", I sreamed as something pounced on my back. "Iris, how are you doing?" Leslie asked. "You didn't have to pounce on my back but I do feel better" I said. "So did you ask Preston?" I asked. "Well I did but it was awkard caus'.... He said he liked you but he just wants to be your friend you know" Leslie responded. "Are you okay?" She asked. "Its alright I didn't really like him" I said. I knew that what I said wasn't true. I really cared but I guess it won't happen.

As I walk home with my friend, Salvador, my head was spinning. Sal was a cute guy who lived around my neighborhood who was cool to hang around. "So Iris are you ok?" Sal asked. "I'm fine" I said with a sad voice. I said bye to Sal when I walked down the other street to my house. As I got in the door I heard the phone ring. I picked up the phone and I heard a guy's voice. I was suprised it was...

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Comments

[FunkieSpunke]

it moves too quickly. Slow down, add a bit mor details. Also confusing because of the format. Skip to the next line when someone else is talking. U put he said, she said, and so forth but sometimes its funner to read when it just has the quotes instead of the he, she, they said and stuff if u no what i mean. But it's good.