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It was a dark night. I was on a trip with my classmates and we were all wondering why it was so dark. It wasn't too late at the time we finished. I wanted to go to sleep. I was tired and I didn't like walking alone in the dark. I was still young.
I was getting close at home but I felt something weird. I had the feeling that I had to run quickly at home. I wanted to ignore that strange feeling but it was too strong. Something like a sixth sense. But I didn't want to run. I didn't want to understand why I had to. I knew it was something bad, but I couldn't ignore it. I started running. I ran as quick as possible. I ran like a ghost was chasing me. But no. It wasn't a ghost. And it wasn't chasing me.
I reached my house. The lights were off so I rushed in ever more scared. What wouldn't I give to forget what I saw. I know only one name to call him although many people have a lot of names. I call him Death. He was something like a black cape floating. All colors where fading away near him. My mother was... My mother was dead. I cried without making any noise so he wouldn't understand I was here. He didn't look at me, but i knew he could see me. I remember that moment... He got near me in a blink of the eye and I could see...nothing inside of the cape. Only darkness. The darkness flew away and the cape faded away like dust. He left just like that.
Why didn't I run? Why? Was he the one who called me to come? If not, who was the one? I keep on telling the story like it was a myth. It was a dark night...
- by axelwarriorvs |
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- | Submitted on 06/15/2009 |
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- Title: It was a dark night....
- Artist: axelwarriorvs
- Description: This is a story I wrote some weeks ago and I thought I should post it here. This is the third story I'm writing and in a general view, all my stories have good comments. My first language isn't english so it is a bit hard for me to write stories in another language, although English is my favorite language after Japanese.
- Date: 06/15/2009
- Tags: dark night
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- axelwarriorvs - 06/20/2009
- yay 4.80!!!!!!!!!!! but post a comment guys
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- axelwarriorvs - 06/17/2009
- wow... nice rating... i have 4.5 from only 2 ratings... :O biggrin ... i wonder if i can get a 5... thanx for the rating guys. i hope some people enter a comment too though... XD
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- axelwarriorvs - 06/15/2009
- Hope you like it ^^
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