The chimerah fight

• Artist: -_Cuthbert-of-Eld_-
• Description: This is going to have a lot to do with chapter two of the assassin. It gives you a little knowledge of the world it takes place in.
• Date: 07/20/2009
• Tags: chimerah fight

so their r 2 big kaimareus that start the world when they hapend the fight in combot it hapened like this first kaimareu took the sord of truth and then the oter got mad bebecuz sord was its so it came to fite the other kaimareu that took sord becuz it need it to kep humen away from eart so the first one gote hed comes down on the other and bites it hard in the nec so it triset to brake big vane it dosnt work tho becuz the skin is to solid so then othe kaimareus take tale and hit the ther other kaimareu it got noced to side of plate and he is hurt but keps to the fite aneway becuz it rily needs vitore so then it gets sord and lifts it while it yells to other yo are goin die we need to hav humens on eart so he put sord into other kaimareus top part and it shots blew beems of energie out of its other hedmouts and it dies in explode so the other kaimareus bring humens so thats how humens where mad.

Comments

[-_Cuthbert-of-Eld_-]

This story was a joke. >.>

[pink kitty kisses]

I think your work has some potential but i have to agree with alysa4132 About the gramar I would make this story so much more understandable! You should Read my work Plz! i think you would appreciate my stuff. I dont have a gift for photography like you do but i'm pretty good in my writing!

[alysa4132]

if you're writing a story you could atleast use correct grammar and spelling!