- One Halloween night a young boy named David was dared by his friends to go into a graveyard for at least one hour. After bluffing and saying he wasn't scared to go he climbed over the locked gate. Little did he know that the gate was locked for a good reason. David had been told by his parents never to enter the graveyard on Halloween night, for an evil imp dwelled there and that she would use her magic on him. As David walked aimlessy he came across a large stone slab that read "turn back now, or you will forever be cursed." David looked up and shown his flash-light onto a very old, small house. "What is a house doing in the middle of a graveyard?" he thought to himself. He decided to open the door and look in after a difficult walk up the old stairs which were falling apart. When he opened the door his flash-light's batteries suddenly died and all he saw on the inside was a large glowing red eye. He tried to run, but something grabbed ahold of his feet! His friends heard what sounded like a young girl laughing coming from the graveyard. They began looking around and asking one another "Did you hear that?" One of the boys answered "It sounded like a little girl laughing." As the evil laughter became louder their hearts started to pound and they ran away leaving poor David all alone. David tried to scream, but he couldn't make a sound as he was pulled into the house and the door slammed shut. Then in the darkness he heard a voice and saw two more glowing red eyes, this time a lot smaller than the first. The voice said "You should've listened to your parents kid" the voice paused and a red light began to glow, it looked as if it was coming of the tip of a cain. The voice began again, "Now you're stuck here forever, just like me!" Nobody ever heard from David again...
- by Whose Your Llama |
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- | Submitted on 10/29/2009 |
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- Title: Happy Halloween!
- Artist: Whose Your Llama
- Description: Alrighty! So, this is also a story I've used for an avi contest. (Happy Halloween (late)) I was very proud of myself for coming up with this when I have a fever and I'm well...I'm not quite, "with it". Obviously, I have fairly bad grammer. Although, I do have to say it's imrpoved since I was little and wrote everything upside-down and backwards. O_o I hope you enjoy the story! Rate and comment, please! :cute:
- Date: 10/29/2009
- Tags: happy halloween
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Little Milkflower - 01/01/2010
- This was a good story. Make sure you make the characters YOURS. Do you understand what I'm saying? P.M. me if you need some help or if you have questions.
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- Whose Your Llama - 11/09/2009
- The reason I didn't go into more detail about things is because I also used this for an avi... So, as you can probably tell, the story already has way more than 500 characters... ^^'
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- Bumbl3Lov3 - 11/08/2009
- It's good! ^^ Although I found you could explain the house a litle more in detail. and maybe a bit more of when he was walking through the gravyard. other than that, yes i like it alot! XD
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- Whose Your Llama - 10/31/2009
- Just now realized that I didn't appologize (I think I may have spelled that wrong) for this being late. So, sorry. sweatdrop
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