• Friends are the people I live for, but if they care for me, I'll die for them...

    A 13 year old student at Ridgeview Middle School is so careing and passionite for everyone. She cares for the sick, by useing her healing powers, and dies over and over agian for the ones who care back. Shes deffinately not a human, and thats how she uses these things. People know shes a Black Magic Immortal, but do they know who she is? Not at first, no, but later, once they find out about her friendship, they do. And unlike most people, shes loveing. She has no heart, for where they had to take it out of her for her to be what she is. But truely, she does have one.


    Beep, beep, beep. SMACK! Beerrrop... My alarm clock powers down after I hit it with my math book. I roll out of bed and say "Mi la vernado" and a pink and black skirt appers with a pink ruffled shirt appears with black leather boots. And my jungled mess of hair automatically flattens down and 2 pink highlights appear in it. My eyes turn from a black eye color to a deep bloody red color. My tanish face turns sort of paleish with some pink blush and black and pink eye makeup. My sharp teeth round out to be more of human teeth as I said the chant and my apperence changes. I use another chant "Mi la vernoi casta mi lo" and I suddenly appear downstaris with a bowl of Frosted Flakes under my chin. I take a bite. Swollow hard and get me some orange juice. My boyfriend comes from the shadows and walks over to me "Could you at least try to act like a human?" He asks with a laugh.
    "No. Well, maybe if you stop appearing in my house randomly after I get dressed. I mean seriously, it's not like I ever gave you permission to get in here." I said giggling.
    "Fair enough" POOF. And hes gone. He dont need spells anymore, since he's been an Immortal for gawd knows how long.
    I walk outside and walk down to the bus stop. Wishing I knew the spell to make a fake I.D so I could drive to school.
    Nobody in Ridgeveiw is human, but we all prefer to act it. Well, most of us anyways. Were all lost Immortals who need something better to do than go around useing random powers for random things.
    But me, I like it like this. Why? Because I can go on and die a lot for my friends, my human friends outside of town, and we both end up liveing. How? Because, immortals re-live life after they die many times.
    As I arrieve up tomy bus stop, I stop and think. Think about if I should go to school today. I decide not to, but then the bus pulls up and Mr. Leo says "Kiochou! You dont want to be late!" And I say "Hold on! Mi la vernoi casta mi boi" And I appear in my seat. Next to my boy friend....










    I arrive to school. Of course everyone is used to my sudden changes, so they don't pay too much attention to me. Although, I do get the sudden "Wow" Looks every now and then. I walk into my classroom and the teacher calls me over.
    I think in my head "Oh gawd, what did I do this time?" and walk over to his desk. I got a new seat. And honestly, I'm glad I don't have to sit beside Dereck any more with his stench. But I feel bad for the poor guy. He can't help it.
    I take my seat next to Cindy Layerson and take out my math book and pencils. And remembered I needed a new notebook. Of course though, I could always POOf one up. So I cited a spell, "Mi la vernende casa da li notea bokk" and a notebook with my faveorite charcter, Ever, out of the book series The Immortals. I laughed as I rembered that I myself was an immortal.
    Cindy asked if she could have a notebook, because she wasnt an immortal. One of the only humans who dare come over here. Why? Because humans mainly believe that we are savaging vampires with nothing better to do than site spells and bite people. True, we do love to chant spells, but un-true about us being savaging vampires. For one, we are'nt even vampires, and two, we only drink Big Red which people mistaken for blood.
    I poofed up another notebook with Cindy's favorite book charcter, Edward Cullen, and handed it to her. And next thing I know the whole, lazy, class starts asking for a notebook, when they know the spell. They learn it in their Immortals class. Unless they were absent that day. Which quite franqley, no one here is ever absent. Of course I could'nt say no so I started making all kinds of them. Until Mr.Leonard came in and took Mr.Spruce's spot. Mr.Leonard was going to be our sub for the day. But nobody liked subs here. They're always so mean and nippy.

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    --End of chapter 2--

    SO anyways, tell me what you all think? The secound chapter any better than the first? Or worst. Or what, I NEED opinions....