the person i look up to

• Artist: Ace The Demon King--
• Description: the person i look up to is in the following essay
• Date: 11/30/2008
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The Most Important Person To Me

The most important to me is my mom. I think shes the most important person to me because shes always there if i need help get hurt or whatever.

She mostly helps me with homework only if i need it though. For ex the other day my math teacher assined a project i barely got what to do so i asked my mom for help she new exactly what to do and i had no clue. So she explained to me what to do then i got what to do so then i finished it in like 20 min.

Another ex is last year i got a HUGE black eye i wasent able to see able to see out of the eye for 5 DAYS so my mom suggested since it was so bad that i go to a doctor so i went to a doctor. The doctor said it was so swolen that he suggest keepin a eye patch for a week. So it turned out my mom was smart making me go to the doctor.

This is why i think my mom is so important to me.

Comments

[vintyy]

first of all, in the second sentence, i is lower case where it should be UPPER case; and you ended it with 'or whatever' which does work in some cases, not this one.
you did the i thing again in the rest of the story honestly
this is more like a 1st grade project than anything else, no offense.

[deathnate1]

very cool dude