nature

• Artist: Xice-cold-hartX
• Description: wat i see in the world
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: nature

do u see wat i see
no u cant


i see a butiful world dieing
by us stare


why can i see this and not u
becase i dont like the citys or nuclier dumps


i dont like electric cars
becase the batters are just killing insted of healing


animals dieing and leaving forever
becase of us


so when i look up in the sky i see some butiey
but also death


so when u go outside think of this
becase r world is dieing and that means so r u cry



feelings u miat feel : cry lol eek emo rofl stare evil crying gonk mrgreen

hope u feel good knowing u know the truth xd

Comments

[lakelurk]

I agree with everything said below.
*BEAUTY. IT IS SPELLED BEAUTY.

[Ms Disdain]

This is... different. The fact I can't understand half of it probally explains that.

[CRM96]

Too many smileys your suppsosed to be writing emotions, using smileys is like cheating.

[Empress Miramusa]

Umm... Wrong section and well.... Did you purposely make this a English teacher's nightmare?

[Mistress Claudia Balzac]

This is not "non-fiction". This is supposed to be "poetry", although calling it "poetry" is really stretching it.

Capitalization, spelling, and punctuation are your FRIENDS.