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Jamie tosses and turns in bed, unable to sleep. Today at her school, a teacher was murdered. Police say it was a wild animal. But there aren't any in town. The moon shines thourgh the window, giving off it's silver aura. The trees dance in the faint wind, causing the shadows to dance. Jamie looks around her bedroom. the small tv was off. the a noise interupted her thoughts. it came from the window in her bedroom. a boy her age glares back. but Jamie's room is on the second floor! she remains paralyed in the boy's strange eerie stare. his eyes glowed red in the dark. ear-lenth jet-black hair ruffled in the wind with a faint glow from the moon. he was hot. he began mouthing these words to her. open the window. Jamie feels her hands opening the window without thinking. He lightly step into her bedroom. with two fingers, he gently pushes her on the wall. Jamie's scared, but can't move. He walks closer to her up to her face. His head moves towards her neck...........
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- by GAlA Site Developer 2 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/24/2009 |
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- Title: The Boy in the Window
- Artist: GAlA Site Developer 2
- Description: A normal girl wakes midnight only to find a boy in her window
- Date: 05/24/2009
- Tags: vampire love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Pasnic - 08/18/2009
- MAKE MORE BLEEP IT!!
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- Princess of Darkness 365 - 07/10/2009
- it is so good you have to write more!
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- GAlA Site Developer 2 - 07/03/2009
- i did not get this from Twilight. I promise. It was just an idea I thought would make a good story.
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- Rachael Ramen - 06/25/2009
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The first part is just like Twilight...
If it wasn't so much like twilight in
the beginning then It would be a 5/5.
But it's only a 3/5.
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- vampire19710 - 06/23/2009
- o kool luv it!!
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- emore_vicky - 06/15/2009
- o come on please write another one....that was really good...make it longer
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- lost_fallenangel_dark - 06/04/2009
- comeon thats to good to be that short!! write a cont. and send it to me PLEASE!! im going to be thinking of that every day now!!
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