War Is...

• Artist: xXxAngelAshesxXx
• Description: This is a poem about war and how it affects the world.
• Date: 07/26/2008
• Tags: warworld

War is the red dot on the target
that won't get hit.
Everyone's fighting
but no one will quit.


War is tearing
the world in two.
Bet'cha didn't know that
but it's so very true.

War is a game
of capture the flag.
No one can find it
Look what we became.


Will it ever end?
Will it ever stop?
Is it just pretend?
Or will the world go pop!


I hope the new prez
will end it soon.
Or else the world will go pop
Just like a balloon.

Comments

[Princesses Allelujah]

i like your poem change the yellow though any way i plan to surve in the military i think its cool because it is bigger than me thats why but i am not saying war is cool but you got to say the wons who died and went there brave some were not but they did it any way be proud of them 5/5

[tiggymewmew]

Hmm.... well I would like it if you used a different color than yellow... it burns the eyes late at night... ^^ and I realize that poetry can have controversial topics so this isn't really going to be a hit at your poem but just in my belief of our soon to be President. His actions will backfire later on and hurt the country more than anything. War is horrible and I want it to stop, but congress is what makes or breaks what our country is doing.

[rampagejoe]

Who has two thumbs and loves this poem (points fingers at himself) THIS GUY

[Bitterness and Isolation]

I like the ryhme in this and the message is very true well done!