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You changed my world with a blink of an eye,
That is something I cannot deny,
You put my soul from worst to best,
That is why I love you with this thing in my chest,
You don’t know what you have done for me,
You pushed me to be the best I can be,
You really are the one for me,
And together forever we shall be,
When I’m with you I will never shed any tears,
For your touch has chased my fears,
You have given me life, and I could be worth while,
It’s even better everytime you smile,
When I’m around you make me jaded,
To bring back faith that almost faded,
Now my life is a dream come true,
It all began when I was loved by you,
Now I have found what I’m looking for,
It’s you and your love and nothing more,
For you have given me feelings, never felt,
And without them I could have never dealt,
I wish I could talk to you till the end of the day,
And now I’m running out of things to say,
Now I’ll end with something I could never show,
I love you more than you’ll ever know.
- Title: True Romance
- Artist: sayoai
- Description: This poem was written by me and a dear friend who is no longer with me. This was what I felt for her and likewise what she felt for me. She always enjoyed her work to be online and other people to see it and sometimes steal it. It made her feel good when someone used her work. You know what they say? "Imitation is the most profound form of flattery."
- Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: love romance heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- AcousticGeek - 02/12/2009
- good
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- _C-h-o-c-o-kitty_15 - 01/29/2009
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very emotional, I can see how you felt about her.
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- One Dandy Fop - 07/27/2008
- I'm not bashing your poem, and certainly I'm not undermining your feelings for your friend; but you should try moving into different rhyme schemes, the couplet doesn't suit emotion such as this.
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- angel853 - 07/27/2008
- that wa that was beautiful i loved it well deserves a 5/5 great peom oh and im srry about ur friend
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