Daddy

• Artist: Agwe-God-Of-Water
• Description: This is a poem I wrote about my dad. He died of melanoma in 2005. I hope you like it!
  
  Oh yeah, and the stuff about God, I'm kinda Catholic, so please don't be offended. It just fit in with the poem.
  
  Please vote fairly and don't steal this because it really expresses my feelings.
• Date: 08/02/2008
• Tags: daddy father sadness feelings

It's good to get
But better to give
If God had remembered this
He'd of let you live

You beat Death once
You'd done it before
But if God had cared
You'd be here for sure

I love you so much
I still think you're great
I guess God took you so early
Because he just couldn't wait

You're forever in peace
And forever in my heart
I didn't know how to say I miss you
But I guess this is a start...

Comments

[onionio]

I'm going to be honest now, you're amazing! This poem expresses such intense emotions very well. I’ve been unsuccessfully attempting the same. So congrats for composing a wonderful string of words, and thank you for the beautiful poem!

[CuttleTheFish]

pretty poem, God has a plan. u just wait and see.

[[~Even-in-Death~]]

Very pretty poem. And even before I knew you were writing about your own father, I could tell it was sincere. I feel almost as if you should have added more to it. If you write more, I would definitely love to read it.

[anime_freak_kouga]

I love your poem. I think how you mentioned about God added to it. It makes sense too. Well written and of course it comes from the heart. You did a great job.

[DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj]

hey i am with u all the way i am very sorry u lost your beloved father and this is probably stupid but i think when i think of my cat who had recently passed away it makes me sad but i think u r a great poet no matter wat and i loved it and still do and now u r on my favorite list cuz u made me cry very hard thanks for sharing your privatey love ya as a friend bye??!!lol??!!!love ya??!!1000/1000

[Fernito]

this is so sweet, you did an awesome job