Light

• Artist: TheWhItEmage3
• Description: another poem i came up w/ one night. again no mean comments, just constructive criticism. thank you :3
• Date: 10/14/2008
• Tags: light death angel shiny bright

A beam straight on your face
you try to look, you haven't a trace
you wander and walk
nothing there but the light, you try to talk
no words, no air, you stop your walk
a bright white light
a light which obscures your sight
you see a face, gleaming
an angel's face, beaming

Comments

[Watch_Me_Soar22]

This is a great poem! The kind that takes a real geniously constructive person to "just come up with" It was just all around amazing!!!