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CHINA DOLL
Broken
and left to mend
Alone
with no helping hand
A broken doll
with no hope at all
One fatal crash
no more than trash
Once beautiful and so proud
but my vanity spoke too loud
No more voice
no more eyes
Should I give up
drink from Death's cup
I might be broken
but I'm not weak
Again I shall walk tall
no longer heed taunting calls
Again I'll be whole
soon I'll be a mended doll
- by tksunshine93 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: China Doll
- Artist: tksunshine93
- Description: this is how i'm feeling at this point of my life with everything that's happening around and to me
- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: china doll broken
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Comments (7 Comments)
- thomlina - 06/24/2010
- loved the poem also i feel like this somtimes. i feel like no one cares and that i am completely invisble. you want to know what i learned though ''if you try to be invisble you'll never be seen''. if people dont like you for you than find new friends. there has to be someone...you cares about you...
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- Stars Shine Brightly - 07/09/2009
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I really love this poem!
You are a great writer and i think you nailed it. - Report As Spam
- spellbound_fallen_angel - 07/09/2009
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You're really good at this. smile
I don't know how old you are,but
I'm 19 and have been writing for a while. smile
Good luck in future writing...
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- Blue River Sprite - 04/09/2009
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Oh, wo, ga, :O
GOOD!
Wow! This is really amazing! Simply beautiful...... like always smile - Report As Spam
- animewolf16 - 04/05/2009
- Great work
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- Sapphire_Honuka_73 - 10/26/2008
- LOVE it girl.keep 'em coming smile ttys!!!!!real soon:3!!!!!!!!!!!
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- tksunshine93 - 10/26/2008
- well hahime-chan i'm glad i could prove u wrong
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