when it ended.

• Artist: lucifers_fallen
• Description: something I dreamed up . =]
  Definatly not my best, the words don't really flow I know..
  =D
  
• Date: 11/02/2008
• Tags: poem love lesbian girls

I know I love her, yes I do.
But, does she love me to?
I go to get her, to see her through,
Ask her, if she'd love to be with me so,
I pull her off to the side, her body, beside mine.
My feelings for this girl, spillout all over
she leans herself up against the wall, smiles in her cute way,
as I cower within myself.
I am short, my head leaned against her chest.
I heard her begin to whisper, she says she'd love to.
her arms tighten around me,
what a beatuiful feeling.

days later I'm more then ever
and she's my only heaven.
And to describe the the most wonderful feeling,
she fell asleep, her body against mysoul.
her cute face smiling sweetly, her warmth owns
and completes my heart

Someday you will all see, how much, two girls can be.

Comments

[Athkore Omnirok]

It may not rhyme, but it expresses emotion. I love it, since it almost perfectly describes my one-in-a-million relationship with my girlfriend. I love it =3

[-chino- x3x]

just at d end i figure out it was lesbians lol...but it was nice..
if it doesnt rhyme its ok..but d flow is good...real cool
good job

[mini_kitty14]

i realy like how u put this in the words everyone gets and that u added that oh so true twist at the ed!!!!!!!!!!

[mychocolatesparkle]

I really like this one. I like the use of the words and how they flow. Not all poems have to rhyme. 3/5 it was supposed to be 5/5 but my finger had a spasm. lol

[earth eats sun]

i really like this!! i like the rhymes and all the words go together! great work! 5/5
Keiko-Chan