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Winged beast walking towards me
Pacing, anticipating, inches towards me
Mist of uncertainty making it hard to see
Still making its way toward me
Closer, and closer
Coming towards me
Face to face finally
An angel gone wrong
An expression filled with sadness
Tears of blood falling from crystal like eyes
Sucking me in
Lost in mystery and misery
Waiting for it to embrace me
Magic itching me from inside
Endless time
The moon above staring down endlessly
Heaven down below
Lost within something
A dream within a dream
A lost child in dire need
Awaked from a long slumber
Wings on my back
Feathers floating around
Ready for flight, but forgetting something
Young boy standing next to me with crystal like eyes
Crying tears of blood
Smiling back at me
Finally free
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- Title: Secret Angel
- Artist: haruhi5
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- Date: 11/08/2008
- Tags: secret angel
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Comments (3 Comments)
- unlovedtreehugger - 04/17/2009
- No, no no no rhyming. It would mess the meaning up. Trust me. Rhyming.. not good. Unless you're gonna stick to, like, preschool stuff. 5/5 :]
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- NOT PHILIP - 11/12/2008
- no comment but in a good way
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- DemeaningMeaning - 11/08/2008
- you have potential, i like it. You could rhyme a little more, though. Good work overall!!
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