When it breaks.....

• Artist: angelic nightmares1223
• Description: umm i just wrote this because... well i think i hurt my friend really bad and i really love him so umm yeah
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: breaks heartache sorry

Go
There
Where
Here

Flying past my fate
I turn around and see....

Nothing
But
Him
Crying
Sad

What have I done?
How could I have been so cruel as to...

Walk
From
It
All
Never
Knew

That he would take it so bad.

Can
I
Apologize
No
Never
Yet
Gone

But please dont just leave me here..
I need you to..

Love
Me
Forever
So
Sorry
Wish

I could take it back...
All of it because you...

Dont
Deserve
This
Pain
Please
Forgive

Me now for everything I've done wrong.
If you can't, I'll understand

Heartache
Always
Felt
Too
Good.....

Comments

[Aerius Solus]

It was very hard to read the way it was formatted and was more of a letter than poetry. I do feel sorry for you though.

[xox_Cherry_Babe_xox]

This is amazing,
Its unique but it tears at youre heart.
I love it.

[Sera Kyoi]

Grr I hate myself for loving sad songs and poems

[ll Doc ll]

This is absolutely wonderful. I've been reading through all of these entries for at least half an hour, and this one has been the best so far.